Feedback from teacher.

We had good feedback from Miss whittaker. There are some things that she thought would help improve our opening sequence. We've decided to do what she said and we believe it could improve it. We had two clips of writing to explain the story, but this gave the opening sequence a trailer like feel. We decided to delete them and it now looks more like a film. We have also moved the text around and it looks more effective in the corner of the screen, not in the middle. We now have a bit more time to make other original parts better by making them a little bit longer.